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[ New Version ] Mikoto Suoh Gakuen/School Uniform

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I heard about all advices people give to me and redraw him totally ♥
I've to say i'm just able to draw him with his lion hairs xD


So he's wearing a black clothe like the game K Project Gakuen who'll go out in no time~
Red tones for the Red King ♥ Kawaii Shoujo (Blushing) [V1] 

I tried to make 2 tones of shading and change a little the colors of the lineart. Was not easy~
And really tried to follow the luminous source.
All the advices are welcomed Kawaii Shoujo (Kyaaa) [V1]  !




Kawaii Shoujo (Shy) [V2]  CREDITS Kawaii Shoujo (Shy) [V2] 


Star Sea Green Star Sea Green BACKGROUNDStar Sea Green Star Sea Green 
- K project official logo
- Novachaser by Abstrcat
- Rainbow by roxy_chan91
- 6695_A by RikkDarkMoon
- Screenshot K Project (Sky -> Changing colors blue to red )




Star Cerulean Please don't forget to credit if any reblog/use. I don't say anything about it until it's done ; ) Star Cerulean 



Kawaii Shoujo (Blinking) [V1] Do You Want a Commission Sweeties ? Kawaii Shoujo (Blinking) [V1] 

UDAPTE - Commissions Open ! ~Hello Sweeties !




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PORTRAIT
(just to shoulder)
250 :points: Fanart/Original Character : Traditionnal/Digital/Mixed Medias
(+75 :points: for adding character) / Simple background offered !




HALF BODY / WAIST UP
Comissions Fanart/Original Character Mixed Media: Traditionnal or Work Digital - 350  Points (+125 add character)
(Simple background offered)
UDAPTE - Commissions Open ! ~Hello Sweeties !




Here maybe are you interested on Commission Me ?
I will be really Happy to work for you !
Take a look at the example and the prices and don't hesitate to send me a note, i'll answer you as fast as possible !






PORTRAIT
(just to shoulder)
250 :points: Fanart/Original Character : Traditionnal/Digital/Mixed Medias
(+75 :points: for adding character) / Simple background offered !




HALF BODY / WAIST UP
Comissions Fanart/Original Character Mixed Media: Traditionnal or Work Digital - 350  Points (+125 add character)
(Simple background offered)
UDAPTE - Commissions Open ! ~Hello Sweeties !




Here maybe are you interested on Commission Me ?
I will be really Happy to work for you !
Take a look at the example and the prices and don't hesitate to send me a note, i'll answer you as fast as possible !






PORTRAIT
(just to shoulder)
250 :points: Fanart/Original Character : Traditionnal/Digital/Mixed Medias
(+75 :points: for adding character) / Simple background offered !




HALF BODY / WAIST UP
Comissions Fanart/Original Character Mixed Media: Traditionnal or Work Digital - 350  Points (+125 add character)
(Simple background offered)
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Gintara's avatar
:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Just as the other critics stated, the areas you should focus on is anatomy and lighting. Since the guy's body is mostly facing forward, his head should be facing that way too. Once his head is facing the right way, then his left arm will appear more naturally as a result. Keep on studying poses and anatomy; once you get more comfortable in it, you should have more ease in drawing.

From what I can see, there is light coming from 2 sides (left and right). Since his hand is on fire, the flame is the source of light. From there, you should be able to spot which areas are light and dark. If you have trouble spotting where the light source is, draw a little sun somewhere so you know where it is. You can erase that later.

Overall, this piece is good. Work on those areas and I'm sure you'll improve. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>